This week, I want to write a story about my childhood.I think it was the biggest adventure in my whole life.
When I was yonger , I was on holiday with my parents to see different places to rest and to spend lovey time together.When I was 4 years old we had gone in Akcay.One day while my mother and father were shopping,my brother and I were playing football together,suddenly I saw somebody and I supposed that he would be my father and I wandered off but he wasn`t my father.That time was too late.I realised that I wouldn`t find my family.I had cried for 4 hours because I was alone and I did not know anybody.
My family had been starting to find me as soon as they could.In addition my mother was crying because it was the first time, I had been lost in my life also this situation was unexpected.Everbody had been shocked because of me.4 hours had passed but there was no result.
4 hours later somebody called me and asked me
" what is your name goodboy. ?"
I said "Edi"
"Why are you crying. ?"
" I can`t find my family."
"What is your father name ?"
"Huseyin"
" Ok don`t wory about it i am going to find your family trust me ok ?"
He was my father`s friend and really he found my family within 5 minutes :)It was very exciting day whole my life and i suppose that I will never forget this story.
Thanks
good story. I can't believe you still remember it so well. good use of past tenses
ReplyDeletespelling: younger, lovely
we had gone in Akcay--we were in... or we went to...
my brother and me were playing football---I (not me) for subjects
as possible as --- as soon as/ as fast as
4 hours had been passing--- had passed